Scene Eleven – “Righteous Music Whole”

From The First Fall – A Musical Origin of Humanity

Setting

The stage lies in twilight — ash still drifting through faint golden light. Where Jack once fell, the ground begins to hum. The glow beneath the soil pulses like a heartbeat. From silence, a steady drum builds — the rhythm of creation itself. A beam of light cuts through the haze, revealing Jack Righteous. He stands renewed — not flesh, but fire, not man, but message. Around him flicker the ghostly echoes of Cain, Abel, and Eve — memories suspended in sound. This is the moment where death becomes voice, and voice becomes prophecy.

Song – “Righteous Music Whole”

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[Intro – Thunderous Chant, Ensemble + War Drums] [ALL] We need! (Champion! Champion! Champion!) We need! (Champion! Champion! Champion!) We rise from dust when Jah speak light, Mi spirit blaze through endless night. From Eden roots to battle soul, We march and chant — Righteous Music Whole! (LET’S GO MY PEOPLE!) [Verse 1 – Reggae March, the Awakening] [JACK] Mi hear di echo cross di age, From garden hush to judgment stage. Blood an’ dust, mi truth reveal, Mi voice become di righteous steel. Mi feel di people, near an’ far, Dem spirit hum beneath di star. Mi sing fi justice, mi sing fi peace, Mi sound a fire dat never cease. Walk free mi people, lift yuh cry, Dis music live — it never die! [Chorus – Rising Harmony, Echo of Creation] [ALL] Righteous Music Whole — di flame survive, Through wrath an’ faith, we stay alive. Righteous Music Whole — di people rise, No kings, no crowns — just open eyes. (CHAMPION! LET’S GO MY PEOPLE!) [Verse 2 – Call and Response, Prophetic Pulse] [JACK] Mi sing, an’ di heavens part di veil, [ENSEMBLE] “Righteous come — truth prevail!” [JACK] Fire test di heart, but nuh destroy, [ENSEMBLE] It forge di man dat guard Jah joy. [JACK] Cain fall low, but still mi see, [ENSEMBLE] Redemption root in prophecy. [JACK] Eve sow pain, yet faith still grow, [ENSEMBLE] Outta her tear come what we know. [JACK] Let’s go my people — walk free again, [ENSEMBLE] Sing fi di world, sing fi di flame! [Bridge – Prophetic Fire, Jack Steps Forward] (Soft drums shift to heartbeat, audience hushes) [JACK] Hear mi voice — from ground to sky, Mi words cut truth where tyrants lie. Mi nah king fi gold or land, Mi fight wid word in Jah command. Cain had fire — mi bear di brand, Now use di flame fi cleanse di land. Abel’s cry still call mi name, Mi guard di weak, mi strike di shame. Walk free mi people — hear mi call, Mi sound reach heaven, mi reach dem all. [Chorus – Full Choir, Audience Awakening] [ALL] Righteous Music Whole — mi name remain, Through war, through dust, through joy an’ pain. Righteous Music Whole — di people know, We build from roots, we overflow. (CHAMPION! WALK FREE! LET’S GO MY PEOPLE!) [Verse 3 – Spoken Declaration, Lights on Audience] [JACK] Mi feel di crowd, mi feel di tone, Every heart now beat like stone. Mi voice nuh beg — it stand, it stay, Mi truth march on when kings decay. No lie can hide, no false can lead, Mi chant sow justice, plant di seed. Mi sound a weapon forged by faith, A lion roar fi truth, not hate. So lift yuh hands, mi people stand, Jah build di kingdom — man to man! [FINAL CHORUS – EXPLOSIVE FINALE: “THE CALL HEARD ROUND THE WORLD”] [ALL – Choir, Drums, and Audience Combined] Righteous Music Whole — di world awake! Di fire rise, di mountains shake! Righteous Music Whole — di people sing! No chains can hold di truth we bring! [CALL & RESPONSE – JACK + AUDIENCE] [JACK] LET’S GO MY PEOPLE — light di flame! [AUDIENCE] Walk free in love — proclaim His name! [JACK] No throne can bind what Jah reveal! [ALL] Di righteous roar — di truth is real! [ALL] Righteous Music Whole — di flame still call, Di voice of man redeem di fall. No curse remain, no fear control, From dust we rise — Righteous Music Whole! [ENSEMBLE + JACK – Final Strike] LET’S GO MY PEOPLE! (CHAMPION!) WALK FREE! (CHAMPION!) Righteous! Music! WHOLE! [Drums thunder — lights burst to white, then fade to gold.] 

Staging During Song

At the first chant, the ensemble rises like spirits from the earth — shimmering forms of every soul Jack has touched. The air vibrates with light and rhythm. Jack steps forward, radiant and unbroken, his voice bridging heaven and man. As he sings, the audience becomes part of the chorus — the living continuation of his purpose. Cain, Eve, and Abel’s spirits stand behind him in silhouette, their faces calm. When Jack raises his hand on “Walk free,” they dissolve into gold light — their stories fulfilled. The final chorus turns the crowd itself into the choir of humanity. Jack’s body fades, but his music remains — eternal, collective, righteous.

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The last cry — “Righteous! Music! Whole!” — resounds like thunder through the hall. The stage explodes into light, then fades to white. All sound falls away except a single heartbeat — the rhythm of creation continuing. Jack’s spirit now lives through the people, through the music, through time itself. The next fire waits to be kindled.

Next: Scene Twelve — “The Second Fire.”

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🔥 Official Scene Guide

1. Scene 1 – “Let’s Go My People”
2. Scene 2 – “I Will Protect Her”
3. Scene 3 – “Mi Nuh Born Fi Bow”
4. Scene 4 – “Just One Bite”
5. Scene 5 – “You Rock, You Run”
6. Scene 6 – “Fire Ah Come”
7. Scene 7 – “Murderrah”
8. Scene 8 – “Brother’s Keeper”
9. Scene 9 – “Blood in the Sand”
10. Scene 10 – “Human Error (The Creed of Haillion)”
11. Scene 11 – “Righteous Music Whole”
12. Scene 12 – “The King Is Dead [Long Live the New King]”

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